Painting

I cannot show my mom my painting to get critiqued... so the next best thing? Blog it and see what she thinks

Trial 1: Notes from mom

1. I need to practice the guy's on the right face specially the angle

2. Don't draw his nose until after I get the angle of his face right

2. He looks fat, not so much like a mayan warrior - make his chest bigger than his gut

Trial 2: Wow, I should take pictures more often. while doing it I felt like I was drawing the same thing... NOT SO! That guys face looks way different. Waiting on council from Mom